A critique

The author’s, who wrote this bibliography, main point was ‘stress at work’. He wants readers to know what the causes of job stress are. He emulated some information about causes of job stress that are well-organized and easy to understand. Background knowledge was not pretty much needed because we’ve had experienced about it every day. Moreover, the author stated some examples about job stress in details, and made me feel as if it were real.
One thing I want to criticize, however, is among the examples, one of them was ‘job stress and women’. He agreed with women’s feeling in their workplace where they have to endure mental and physical harassment. Also he said that women usually get stress from unwelcome verbal or physical conduct, and offensive or intimidating behavior. I thought it can be true. On the other hand, I thought that the writer had better write not only women’s but also men’s side. Because men also can have stress from women who don’t want to work same as men. In other words, now the author wrote very well, but if he treated both sides, it could be more perfect without any discontent.